Destiny so dark,Shadows were hauling
Creepy thoughts kept crawling
So fearful I’m, forget about window far
Thumping’n’ pushing a wall so far
Will and endeavours were about to sink
A window got open in a blink
Strong wind thwaked above window
I pick my pieces, run for that window
I fall in flurry, it’s a ladder here
Pick and took that ladder, my destiny there
Step by step I was rising up
Everytime I slip but I step up
Unable to reach till last, felt so fed up
It’s the 7th time I rise and step up
My ladder tremble this time,
Hit the floor So hard my ladder got
broken in mean time
Tears welled up in my eyes
Window, that ladder doesn’t belong
to my destiny I cry
cool breeze & rays were creeping
I pick myself with ribbs,aching
Banged with force took a chance
Otherwise dark Shadows would be my penance
Eventually that was a door
Those breeze & rays touches my inner soul
Like what tides makes to sea shores
Happiness and glee in eyes was in excess
A breath of freedom with touch of success.
Some times we need a big fall to succeed…
Thanks for stopping by and reading 😊
Perky
beautifuIIy penned
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Thank you 😊
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You also write poems that is good, well written and yeah never loosing hope is necessary, fall is required I think otherwise we can never become better… Keep writing such inspirational poems….
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Wow. Good flow. It felt like a song
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Thank you so much😊
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Our greatest glory is not in never falling. But in rising every time we fall.
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Indeed dear! Very well said 😊
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Fabulous
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Thank you! 😊
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I loved it Neha. That’s a great message. I great time reading. Every word and each line was splendid just went of with its own pace
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Thanks a lot! Vishnu😊
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I love it 😍
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Oh! Thank you so much dear😊
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What an amazing piece of poetry!
We should keep trying and not let the fear of falling hinder our chances at success.
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Thank you so much! Abhishek
Indeed we should keep faith and strive hard😊
Have a good day😊
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You too! Have a good day😊
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Beautiful piece Perky
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Thank you so much! Nirant.😊
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Pleasure always for beautiful stuff Perky ☺️
What’s ur good name??
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My Name is Neha😊
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Great Neha !! Ur strong with ur words ☺️
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